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-Asking For Love-
Contributed by
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Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 03:55:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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God, I'm not asking for much,
I'm only asking for love,
I'm asking is heaven really above....
Because when I'm down
my arms fall,My heads low
and hearts beatin' slow....
There must be love somewhere,
In this time, In this mind
of mine that's fading away....
For one thing I have left is my hope,
My dreams are real
and faith steal is stronger than ever....
I know she's there,I can feel her,
I can hear her, I adore her,
So what should I say,
I've been lost today....
Cuss she walked me through
the moonlight,
Only to burn me with the sun,
But I feel like she's my number one....
Well, I'm going to bed now,
Ask her to meet me in dream land
where we can meet,
Shake hangs & be unique....
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Re: -Asking For Love-
(User Rating: 1 )
by navydocny on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 05:11:24 AM AEST
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Beautiful...
I feel your want...
You'll find each other...
Just stop looking....
That's the key........
Keep it up! |
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Re: -Asking For Love-
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by nature360 on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 09:02:48 PM AEST
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Quit a loving poetry for wanting to meet you love.
True God gives us dreams to guide us through.
How wonderful to want love.
Please change last line g to d i make such mistakes often.
Commendable write. |
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