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Silly Girl
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 08:02:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Im sorry for messing with your head
Im sorry for the things that were said
I apologize for looking alive when I feel dead
I regret nothing
I open up to you, here, instead
I contemplate retreat
I beg at your feet
I want you need
I want us to be
Together
Harmoniously
Living free
Lovingly tender
Furiously pleasured
A daunting endeavor
A love that is clever
I reach for you
In the end
I ask only to be remembered
________
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Copyright ©
Jyssvw22
... [
2008-09-03 08:02:13]
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Re: Silly Girl
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 10:50:59 PM AEST
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Wow, Jyss, a song for the ages. Like a lonely star in a black sky
there is a plead for more and nothing, if you know what I mean.
I adore the last stanza. The emotion inside of it is tremendously
full. And the last line is subtly humble. Beautiful work, jyss.
As always ~
~ Breezy
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Re: Silly Girl
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by wizard on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 03:00:40 AM AEST
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nicely done,
wiz |
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Re: Silly Girl
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 11:16:18 AM AEST
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The cool sarcasm is free flowing here, and as per usual it is furiously defending your meek heart.
A relatable theme to us all, and don't we all hope to leave a lasting impression? |
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