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Leaning on the Everlasting Arms
Contributed by
FLStatePoetryAmbassador
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Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 11:05:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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When I am down and in my darkest stage,
I am leaning on God's everlasting arms.
When I get old and live through old age,
I am leaning on God's everlasting arms.
When I am happy and feel like singing,
I am leaning on God's everlasting arms.
When I hear the prayerbells ringing,
I am leaning on God's everlasting arms.
On my job and in my home,
I am leaning on God's everlasting arms.
When I am bored and all alone,
I am leaning on God's everlasting arms.
When the body is cramping and the soul is weak,
I am leaning on God's everlasting arms.
Unto that blessed and heavenly mansion which I seek,
I am leaning on God's everlasting arms.
When I wake up and when I sleep,
I am leaning on God's everlasting arms.
When my heart is broken and I need to weep,
I am leaning on God's everlasting arms.
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Re: Leaning on the Everlasting Arms
(User Rating: 1 )
by high_on_duct_tape on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 03:45:04 PM AEST
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I was not impressed. Yes, it's a poem. That's about all that could be said. I found the repetition rather pointless and monotonous. No strong message was apparent. You made a point, but failed to convince. Not horrible, just rather dull.
Feel free to ask for elaboration,
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