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tomorrow
Contributed by
spooky
on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 11:24:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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a cup of tears,,
a handful of joy,,
no one to show ,,
no one who cares,,
time rushes by,,
as the wind that blows gentley,,
leaves slowly falls,,
as you catch them in your hand,,
some to give ,,
some one to care,,
to catch the tears,,
as easy as to catch the leaves,,
one cup of happiness,,
I would give,,
a yard full of leaves,,
I would give to you,,
one chance to show I care,,
one love for you,,
don't look back,,
for I'm not there,,
look for me here,,
and i'll be there,,
for tomorrow will be gone,,
craig s.meeks
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spooky
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2008-09-03 11:24:52]
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Re: tomorrow
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 03:02:07 PM AEST
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ive always loved your poetry my friend, and this one is so beautiful, love your unique style:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: tomorrow
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 10:40:41 PM AEST
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There is a wisdom in this as soft as a gentle breeze. The atmosphere
of your words builds a momentum of tender thought that drifts upon
the soul with sudden comfort. Like a perfect memory.
The last line captures a lasting message. Time is of the essence.
Great post!
~ Breezy
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Re: tomorrow
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by shelby on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 09:34:23 AM AEST
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I loved the touch of nature with these words of wisdom. Everything mixing perfectly to form a master and wise write. Nicely done my friend.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: tomorrow
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 10:33:13 AM AEST
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Craig,
I echo the sentiments of
my fellow poetess Breezy~
The last stanza is fantastic
dear poet. A wonderful write
beautifully crafted. Keep up
the great work.
hugs,
dreamer |
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