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Unspoken Words
Contributed by
Taizy_May520
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Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 05:08:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Have you ever wanted to say something,
but you were to afraid of the reaction?
Have you ever wanted to tell someone
how they make you burn with passion?
I feel that way at this very moment
and I have never felt it stronger!
With ever time he speaks my name;
I don't think I can hide it much longer.
He touches my hand.... I shake,
he looks into my eyes.... I get goosebumps.
He calls me doll.... I have to smile,
he holds me close.... my heart jumps.
How do I find the words to say that
to the only person I want to tell?
I want to tell him how it feels'
that it feels like I'm under his spell.
Every waking moment of every day,
he completely drives me up a wall.
He really doesn't have any idea
just how hard I'm about to fall.
The only thing I'm wishing for now
is that he'll be there to catch me.
I'm not sure how my heart will take it
if it's pushed away and set free.
If there's a wishing well unvisited
or a shooting star not yet taken.
All I ask is to be the lucky soul
whos wish is actually worth makin'.
I want him to really need me
and to look at me with desire.
I want to hear from only him
how without me there is no fire.
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Taizy_May520
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2008-09-03 17:08:04]
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Re: Unspoken Words
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 07:02:56 PM AEST
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Very nicely done. And yep, I have wanted to say something to someone but was too afraid of the reaction. Just gotta do it.
Good work. Keep it up.
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Unspoken Words
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by navydocny on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 04:34:11 AM AEST
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Very well written..
I can hear and feel the desire in your words..
I hope you get what you wish!
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Re: Unspoken Words
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 06:57:45 AM AEST
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Nice work...I think everyone can relate to his at some point in his/her life.. I know I can...
Jenni |
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