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Alive with my eyes closed.
Contributed by
LauraMary
on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 07:23:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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I can escape!
IN THE STARS.
I stare,
and I'm gone!
My mind detatches
and flies away
from the PRIZON
It's kept in.
Then comes my heart.
Ripping itself loose
and POW!
IT'S DONE IT!
My heart
and my mind.
Floating through space.
I'M ALIVE! I'M ALIVE!
My body is broken
to pieces.
And I'm finally alive.
Copyright ©
LauraMary
... [
2008-09-03 19:23:57]
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Re: Alive with my eyes closed.
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 09:02:06 PM AEST
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your sense of alleviation in this piece is evident, nice job... i'm glad you found your escape...we all need on sometimes... too often people find escape through maladies...i'm glad you found a simpler way...
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Re: Alive with my eyes closed.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 05:55:14 AM AEST
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This is so beautifuly expressed,
for a mind in prizon you certainly
know how to liberate the readers
imagination, lovely as always
and most enjoyable to read and
pounder . . .
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Re: Alive with my eyes closed.
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by shelby on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 09:30:57 AM AEST
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I loved the feeling I got while reading this. Freedom at last. Nicely done I like your style.
Hugs
Michelle |
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