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to bones
Contributed by
vick
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Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 12:22:39 AM in AEST
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if i make you my world
would you promise to not let it fall?
crumbling forests, polluted oceans and all?
would you save me from hunters
that will seep into my mind or keep me from dreams?
would we stay as it seemes
with hands linked and minds open
Because if I made you my world
i couldn't take its end
its armageddon
not another time again.
If your surrounding ocean was sucked up,
dried up,
leaving me thirtsty with no water,
I would break down to smaller pieces
to bones
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vick
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2008-09-04 00:22:39]
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Re: to bones
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by Solidsnake116 on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 07:14:24 AM AEST
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| honestly, im just commenting so i can post more than one measly poem a friggin day. That said, this actually wasn't bad. |
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