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Vegas
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 10:06:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Out of the two
Only one cares
Out of luck
Gasping for air
What the yuck
What is that hit in your hair
Stupid ich
Cant you see Im standing right there
Watch what you say
dont get popped
Cuff those hands
Making your pants drop
To your knees
To please
The first one to walk down the drunk block
Get a name, a number
Why must you tick his clock
Lick the spot
Grab the rock
A bed
A beach
A balcony
You first on top
Where is your self respect
Dignity intact
Your actions detract
From the person you were before the wetness attacked
Later it came back
Came all over your bent back
Dripped off your perked rack
Onto the tongue
Gargling white crap
Fingering the crack
Swallowing the sack
Making it fat
Loving it
Wishing it never to stop
Over-
Just like that
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Re: Vegas
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 01:05:03 PM AEST
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Clever :)
The title grabbed my attention as it is the name of my girl dog :) The explicit vulgarity really kinda works here, it appears to be an expressive piece about life overall, but choices and potentially misstepping, or even overstepping, if you will.
The end doesn't seem to justify the means. Well said. |
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