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The Crazy Things
Contributed by
allforyou
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Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 09:18:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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This is a sense of the vestibular type,
you can't see it, but you've heard all the hype.
What crazy things that love can make you do.
You're a hostile hostage, trapped in the dark,
this sense of roaming blindly in my heart.
What crazy things that love can make you do.
This is a sense that makes no sense at all,
suspended in air, yet grounded, you fall.
What crazy things that love can make you do.
You are the smoothest piano keys,
this sense of an echo behind your ivory teeth.
What crazy things that love can make you do.
Copyright ©
allforyou
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2008-09-05 09:18:09]
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Re: The Crazy Things
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by wizard on
Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 11:37:11 AM AEST
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another great post...
cant wait for more,
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Re: The Crazy Things
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by navydocny on
Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 03:47:37 AM AEST
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Great imagry, great diction...
(great everything)
Wonderful piece....
Please write more!
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Re: The Crazy Things
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 12:12:56 PM AEST
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This is a great post. Word choice and connections were so intriguing. As always, well done.
~Jesse
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