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An old flame
Contributed by
Vic
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Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 01:15:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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T' was a few years ago when I met
This dusky and long haired Cutie
A meeting that I will never regret
Falling in love is indeed a thing of beauty
I complimented her wavy mane
Trust me it was from the heart
I often take a walk down memory lane
to think about her though we're apart
We sat one night, just she and I
To talk about life and love
We were under the purple sky
With the illuminating stars above
She had a spirit that wouldn't tire
She danced as much as she could
We were sometimes like cotton and fire
Whatever we did, we did real good
No sir, I didn't plan a seduction
It was as natural as a volcano
I totally loved the ecstatic eruption
What she felt about it? I don't know
She might have liked me more
If not for the times I cracked
Wish I Could feel the long hair she wore
and the thrill that she once packed
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Vic
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2008-09-05 13:15:08]
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Re: An old flame
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by emystar on
Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 01:46:00 PM AEST
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Wow vic,
this is simply beautifull.
Awesome write.
huggs, peace, smiles,
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Re: An old flame
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by nature360 on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2008 @ 12:43:27 AM AEST
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Think you should have titled 'The Flame Burns'.
I can see the fumes that leave your heart.
How wonderful it is to feel this.
Congrats for the write. |
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