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These Days
Contributed by
texasw97
on
Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 06:44:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Im sitting back looking at the sky I want to ask God the question why Im tired of battling myself every day Im tired of living this way Headache after headache this is getting old Its August, yet my aurora is cold Once again Im talking through my pen When will all the pain and suffering end Im trying my best to walk with a smile I dont remember how its been a while For some reason Im rushing time to fly by I sit here wondering if Im a special guy Everywhere I go I feel like a Misfit People avoid me like I smell like ***** Im sitting here not having any fun I walk around as if I were a loaded gun I feel like Im about to have another Overload In any given minute Im about to explode Im mad because I cant blow or snort from my nose Its easy to tell why I consider myself a Black Rose
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Re: These Days
(User Rating: 1 ) by Catalina on
Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 03:04:00 AM AEST (User
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seems 2 me i've been right where u r. But we keep hope b/c change isn't far. you may never know where or when it'll be ur turn to smile again...
very talented write you have a gift...
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Re: These Days
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 01:09:14 PM AEST (User
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yup, i can relate with this piece of art, esp. these days. ur not a misfit, actually no one's a misfit, u jus gotta put urself out there. thanx for sharing ur thoughts/feelings, that's what poetry's about, but dont do anything i wouldnt do...the pain will go away since there's no use in suffering. nice write. take care
-K.Z. |
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