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Self RightiouS suicide
Contributed by
Patterz
on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 03:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I go back in time
when I see you
remembering
feeling
everything
somedays I think that
i have escaped
you
only to be so harshly reminded
that you own me forever
this is my only escape
as brief
as it may be
release your hold on me
for i am punishing myself
I continue
crying crimsons tears
until i cannot take it
anymore
and i forefit my life
over to you
-{P@'o3}-
Copyright ©
Patterz
... [
2003-03-18 15:45:00]
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Re: Self RightiouS suicide
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by tease_whizz on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 03:57:59 PM AEST
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| excellent write - powerful and deeply moving. just remember, he doesn't own you if you don't let him. you're stronger than that - he's the coward. good luck in the future, never look back, keep writing, Kate x |
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Re: Self RightiouS suicide
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 04:21:22 PM AEST
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very touching, but you must believe in yourself, he is nothing but weak and you are a survivor
Shari |
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Re: Self RightiouS suicide
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 05:01:07 PM AEST
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I agree with Ilhar rapists are weak cowards and u are strong thnx for sharing this poem it was really vivid I think a lot of rape survivors can relate. Hang in there.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Self RightiouS suicide
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 02:23:05 AM AEST
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This poem is powerful. Well written. You never did anything wrong so never feel you have. You are the strong one, the survivor. He is weak and he is nothing. Peace to calm your soul.................
Michelle |
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