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LARGE HADRON COLLIDER.
Contributed by
infallablejeff2
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Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 10:07:44 AM in AEST
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Large Hadron C'llider go away, And do not smash my world, Your proton beams shall interplay, To show your pow'r unfurled. So make your black holes,strangelets too, Higg's bosons by the ton, But all you make is dross to me, So shove it up your bum!
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Re: LARGE HADRON COLLIDER.
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 06:46:46 PM AEST
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I'm not sure I understand the point of this poem, or why it's written as it is.
First of all, the lack of lines or spacing is unnessarily confusing at best. Also, you don't complete the rhyme scheme (strangelets too~dross to me).
Furthermore, the meaning is unclear. Why do you feel the way you do? I'm not getting that.
Feel free to ask me to expand on that.
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