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Go Away
Contributed by
Bubbles02
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Thursday, 11th September 2008 @ 11:00:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I read that note,
The one that you wrote.
You wrote it when you loved me,
When I was the only girl you could see.
I read itand burst into tears.
Because you dont love me anymore.
You dont care about me in the least.
I wish I couldve stopped all of this before,
Before any of it ever took place.
Because now, I cant forget your face.
You created a demon inside of me, an angry beast.
He wants out and he wants it badly.
Every day, I fight to keep him inside of me.
I wish you would care.
Because this isnt fair.
Im stuck dealing with this on my own.
Im all alone.
And I dont know what to do
Because I still cant stop thinking about you.
Every time I see your face in the hallway,
I wish youd just go away.
Youll never care again.
Youll never love me.
So just go away.
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Bubbles02
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2008-09-11 11:00:40]
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Re: Go Away
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th September 2008 @ 12:35:18 PM AEST
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Hi bubbles,
this is very sad but well written.
Hang tuff friend.
I know the feelings.
I find in my own life the ones that walk away without feelings never luved me in the beggining.
Read breezys last write. She hit the nail on the head.
Keep writing.
big huggs, prayers, hope, peace,
emy |
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Re: Go Away
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by Catalina on
Thursday, 11th September 2008 @ 11:50:24 PM AEST
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| A truely great write from the heart. One that is hurting greatly. Now you may not see it, but time will heal this wound. Don't let anyone tell u how to feel as your feelings are valid. But I promise you this will pass and you will grow from it. You will be a stronger woman. I guarentee it. |
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