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Need
Contributed by
navydocny
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Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 06:25:22 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Weathered paint like dead skin furls, what it has seen peers through a thurl
Like an old pair of slippers that we hold, despite just having to let them go
That cat on the porch that is always there, it stays despite not giving it fare
An old swing that the children often neglect, though its not caused by their disaffect
Old tire in the grass that gathers the rain, yet important enough to house the bane
The bottle of perfume that is never used, it only lingers for those to be rused
Snow shovel propped against the garage, quietly waiting for winters barrage
All are ordinary at their prime, now all extraordinary and sublime
Waiting for need and so they stay, wanting to be requisite every day
Its what we all want and what we all need, the purpose, the love, the drive, the heed
The next you pass that needful thing, remember its purpose and the love itll bring
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Re: Need
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 07:53:32 AM AEST
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woooooooo! What a great way to remind us of the simple things, the unnoticed things. Yet I hope they are still there when we need them......AND what about if we don't ever need them?....hmmmm
thought provoking write! |
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by karoody on
Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 08:16:52 AM AEST
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very inventive! those tires and shovels will rot and rust if we continue to ignore them. then whether you want them, need them. it doesn't matter if we wait too long. nice lesson for those who take things for granted. thank you for sharing...it's truely beautiful.
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 08:42:33 AM AEST
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wonderfully put
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Re: Need
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 10:03:49 AM AEST
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what a beautiful calming, soft write of life, im like your shovel, here if someone needs me, but pretty much ignored in daily life lol, i loved this... it gives a gentle feeling that all is well..
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Need
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 11:23:11 AM AEST
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I really loved this...it is an amazing write...
I thought the rhyming sounded a bit forced in some places tho....
Jenni |
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Re: Need
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by brokenwings on
Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 02:27:49 PM AEST
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the things we overlook, or the people.. this one will make you think, big time
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