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This Paper
Contributed by
allforyou
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Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 08:06:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Patiently waiting,
my quiet heart sits folded;
For strong hands that,
will pry the creases open.
Copyright ©
allforyou
... [
2008-09-13 08:06:15]
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Re: This Paper
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 08:37:44 AM AEST
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very nice
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Re: This Paper
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 08:55:26 AM AEST
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Great job girl. This quiet, unassuming little
piece made me reflect and really feel for
you. Always a pleasure.
~Jesse |
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Re: This Paper
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 11:10:45 AM AEST
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wow. what a soft and melancholic verse. It evokes so
much with so few words. I have only seen this done a
handful of times with any kind of affecting quality.
But you have done it with excellence!
Outstanding! A work of art!!
~ Breezy
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Re: This Paper
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 12:01:33 PM AEST
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wow and wow! this is an excellent poem, it is perfection!
hugs n' love nessa |
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