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Nous Défions
Contributed by
navydocny
on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 12:26:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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There is none on earth that doesnt make Thoughts of you, a moments take You purloin your love, and lodge it away To give to another, some awful day What is my sentence, and what was the crime I subsist in contrition, until its my time To be forgiven, and hope not forgot When Im placed in the ground, and left there for rot I dread the days, as I dread the nights Your sweet memories, always become hurtful blights How do I mend, your wound that wont heal You pick at its scabs, while against me you steel Perhaps one day forward, youll wake to the morn The wound will be mended, my love now forsworn Believe as you will, and do as youve borne Will lead to us both, a life disadorn
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Re: Nous Défions
(User Rating: 1 ) by karoody on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 04:53:25 PM AEST (User
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well said! you truely have a way with words. i wish i knew someway to help in your current plight....
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Re: Nous Défions
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 01:35:41 AM AEST (User
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Steve, there is tremendous pain in this. I hope it helps temporarily
while you are trying to stay sane. I know what this is like. I do.
And it is not something I'd wish on anyone. I love how you can
wield the pen so elegantly to express the deepest emotions.
Your words are beautiful. All my hopes and prayers go out to you.
~ Breezy
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Re: Nous Défions
(User Rating: 1 ) by Alphadux on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 03:18:23 AM AEST (User
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Not bad |
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