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Sweet Surrender
Contributed by
nature360
on
Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 02:16:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Love grip surrenders as finger interlock
Stretched, longing freely caresses desire.
Photogenic moments, a blush in radiance
Trip the heart, in charged flashs of light.
Boundless, unrelenting I fume and yearn,
Crave in relish and pleasure of the flesh.
Warmth of your naked tendons to mesh
Merge with passion in heavenly delight.
You awaken and sequester my innocence
Tread squeeze my body into your whims.
Naked inclination sweeps mind and will,
Into forced submission and eager assaults.
I quake, as spirits begun their yield
Exposure echos to infuse existence.
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nature360
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2008-09-14 14:16:29]
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Re: Sweet Surrender
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by navydocny on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 09:45:22 AM AEST
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Very, very nice...
A very desirous read.....
Keep it up!
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Re: Sweet Surrender
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 05:09:14 AM AEST
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Sensual and flowing write. Nicely done.
Michelle
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