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Forbidden Love
Contributed by
alibof10
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Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 02:29:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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A love thats so true
A love thats not new
A love thats never forgotten
A love thats forbidden
I love her! He say
But all he gets is a No way!
No one agrees
They take him to his knees
I love him! She say
They reply Just go away.
No one agrees
They set all the boundaries
Against this love they all go
But what they dont know
The love continues to grow
Someday it will glow
They keep them apart
Take the girl and depart
Give the guy a new start
Let him live and be smart
They let them bleed
Not caring what they need
Erasing their love was their goal
But their love was whole
True love never dies
In the night they feel each others cries
They know they are still together
As they promised, "Always and forever!"
Time passes and she escapes
And hears about the disastrous fate
Her love died several years ago
I love you was his last bellow
She slowly recovers from the blow
Begins living her life of sorrow
Blaming her family for taking her
Cursing life for taking away her closure
Filled with agony she lives
Till one day she gives
Finishing her last chapter
Stopping her lifes counter
She wakes up alone in the dark
Fearing every spark
Running from every sound
Falling towards the ground
He catches her as she falls
And in his arms she cries
Not believing they are finally together
Together always and forever
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2008-09-14 14:29:47]
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 03:10:28 AM AEST
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wow, what an forceful ending! I really feel for the fateful loves.
How horrid. I could not live if I were separated from the one I love.
It would be like trying to live without air. Great job at expressing
the pain and the serious ache one feels when family and friends try
to come between two people who were meant to be together.
Excellent post!
~ Breezy
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by Puppy on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 03:50:48 AM AEST
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Wow this was such a powerful poem for me! I could so relate to your poem i have been in the suituation where i have been seperated from someone i cared deeply about! i know that pain so well! great write!
Puppy :) |
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by Muinanyere on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 03:16:53 PM AEST
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| this is so sad, like Romeo and Juliet, beautifully written |
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by Starchild7 on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 05:34:12 PM AEST
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This is so true that true love will never die, nothing can take it away, this is a very powerful piece of writing, thank you so much for sharing it.
With love and light Starchild |
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