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One-night lover
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 10:56:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I saw him and I flustered a moment Like I normally do when I see a guy It wasn't much later That the party took off And we started acting crazy After darkness fell, that's when things began happening It was innocent enough Spin the bottle, a childish game But when he spun it I looked in shock As he crept towards me A smile on his face I leaned in gently, too high on adrinalin to care And when our lips touched I felt it, that unfamiliar feeling hit my stomach His arms at my waist, mine clutching his back Our lips parted gently And the spark appeared The taste of his tongue excited me Like a forbidden fruit He was perfectly perfect And I remember tasting mint Even though he'd not had anything to eat or drink I wanted to moan, press myself against him And never let go I don't remember how long it went Not nearly long enough When hands ripped at our limbs And tore us apart Laughter filled everyone And I smiled too "Hi my name's Lexy, who are you?" He told me and then on I felt incredibly enthralled He was enticing, exciting When he said goodbye, I felt myself stand up and gently cross the floor Wrapping my arms around him tightly And bringing my lips to his I never did anything like this It was slow and soft, gentle and chaste As I kissed him goodbye I knew it I'd never see him again... But I knew it the moment I kissed him I had fallen in love with him
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Re: One-night lover
(User Rating: 1 ) by Muinanyere on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 02:58:22 PM AEST (User
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this is so sad but sweet, great write |
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Re: One-night lover
(User Rating: 1 ) by karoody on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 05:48:01 PM AEST (User
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very sweet write from you...this is a game that i never got to play....i think i got cheated in my childhood...i never knew it could yield to this much emotions and passion...
*sigh*
thanks for letting me live it here instead
kara |
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Re: One-night lover
(User Rating: 1 ) by Crow on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 10:58:06 AM AEST (User
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what an excellent read, not to bitter not to sweet. very good poem. Lane |
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