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Little Hill
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 09:19:28 AM in AEST
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Hard to believe this is a truck stop.
Tree's flowers and rolling grassy hills.
Leshay and I off for a nature adventure
the smell of rain coming in the distance.
Cooler day, nothing better, off we go on a stroll.
Smell of green and touch of wild purple daisy
all scattered in unformed rows.
Pine-cones gathered here and there.
No time for rolling in the clover,
for today it is pretty to just stare.
Storm brewing wind tossing bright red leaves
hard to imagine its already that time of year.
It was our special time...... standing on the little hill.
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2008-09-16 09:19:28]
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Re: Little Hill
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 09:26:06 AM AEST
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sweet poem
Shari |
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Re: Little Hill
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 09:47:41 AM AEST
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| this is soft Shel..nice look into your world, there is plenty of beauty out there..good read my friend. |
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Re: Little Hill
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by navydocny on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 09:59:19 AM AEST
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Nice....
This was extremely visual for me....
You brought there, thanks!
Beats the brown where I am.....
Steve |
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Re: Little Hill
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 10:59:01 AM AEST
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Lovely visuals, grrlfriend..Thanks for sharing this....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Little Hill
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 11:02:29 AM AEST
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it sounds really pretty there, this was such a lovely poem, a joy to read:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Little Hill
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 12:08:28 PM AEST
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Aw Michelle, this was beautiful! With your words you made me
want to be right there with you! :) I LOVE this time of year, and
in your few stanzas you've reminded me some of the reasons why.
Wonderful post, hun! D and I were just discussing last night how
wonderful it must be to travel like that. I mean, to be able to see
SO much! It must be amazingly inspiring. =) Hope all is well ~
*hugs*
~ Breezy
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