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Ruin
Contributed by
Amicus
on
Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 06:47:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The clouds slowly change
From their beautiful purity
But i am just another obscurity
Waiting for the clouds to rearrange
Doubt lines my disappointed face
As I stare into the sky where no one looks down
I look at the ground where everyone looks up
They stare blankly filled with disgrace
I AM RUINED
Acidic tears that burn through desire
Tears that taint my will and mind
Tears that would make a man go blind
Cry until faith I can acquire
Who'll give me this impossible will
With no more sky above
And forever without love
No one can stop this pain until
Someone will fight back against opposition
Someone will put pain into submission
Someone to fight against our apparitions
Someone to fight my painful deposition
From birth I was placed ready to be judged
From birth I was nothing more than a smudge
Ready to be wiped away, and thrown with the defects
With the lowest standards that one would expect
Nothing more than what you'd anticipate
Everyone thought I'd slowly dissipate
From body and mind but they were mistaken
Thinking that I was born forsaken
I AM RUINED
*whisper*
I am ruined
Copyright ©
Amicus
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2008-09-17 06:47:53]
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Re: Ruin
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by navydocny on
Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 07:00:47 AM AEST
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conviction
loyalty
belief
trust
credence
There are more....
This is really good...
I'd like to hear it put to music....
Great Job!
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Re: Ruin
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 01:35:11 PM AEST
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how about clarity? I enjoyed this as well. What type of music will accompany this? I'm interested to hear
good luck!
kara
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