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Baghdad 2006
Contributed by
navydocny
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Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 01:05:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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The peaceful sunrise of a new day
A beautifully sung Adhan, calling all to prayer
Mingling strangely, with the staccato of gunfire
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Re: Baghdad 2006
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 02:25:36 PM AEST
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| I cannot remember all the rules of haiku, but as far as the set you let us walk into here...beautifully unsettling...take care of yourself |
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Re: Baghdad 2006
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by Lilymaemax on
Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 06:10:33 PM AEST
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Amazing were does one start with this kind of poetry?Also love the softness ot mingling strangely to the aggression of staccato of gunfire.
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Re: Baghdad 2006
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 11:00:44 PM AEST
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This really sets a stunning image in my mind.
It doesn't fall under Haiku's(see Haiku in the forum thread for the rules) But that matters little, for this stands on its own as a great work! |
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Re: Baghdad 2006
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 07:13:05 AM AEST
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Excellent imagery....
Looking forward to your next attempt, using the 5-7-5 format...
Jenni
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Re: Baghdad 2006
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 08:12:18 AM AEST
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great imagery
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