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Lament for Landan
Contributed by
alisteal_rayne
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Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 05:40:29 PM in AEST
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Spongebob sheets left made
Your room is eerily quiet
Your toys are left untouched
Everything is where it was laid
Clothes packed up away
Never to be worn again
Your treasures all locked up
And people walk past them every day
Memories of tears
And laughter and love
Memories of pain and longing
Memories that should still be here
The house is very still
Since youve been gone
I cant say I much like it
The silence my heart kills
I dont know why you went
But I miss you every hour
And Ill see you again someday
When Im heaven Sent
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Re: Lament for Landan
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by navydocny on
Friday, 19th September 2008 @ 12:13:21 PM AEST
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My sympathy..
Excellent ode...
Nothing is greater than the loss of a child....
Take care,
Steve |
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Re: Lament for Landan
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 19th September 2008 @ 12:46:18 PM AEST
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This is so heartbreaking...I am sorry for your loss... Believe me, I know the feeling...
Just remember, he's pain free and happy in his home above...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Lament for Landan
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by Angelic_Demon on
Monday, 22nd September 2008 @ 06:55:42 PM AEST
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You never showed this to me the other day! I had to go hunt it down.
It's so so sad, but very well written. It's a great tribute to him! |
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