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LIES
Contributed by
theangelestdevil
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Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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YOU TOLD ME YOU LOVED ME,
I BELIEVED IT LIKE CRAZY.
I CANT STOP THINKING ABOUT THAT DAY,
IT WAS JUST SO AMAZING.
YOU TOLD ME YOU WOULD CARE FOR ME, THAT YOU WOULDNT LET NO ONE HURT ME.
BUT AS TIME WENT BY, IT WAS YOU THE ONE WHO HURT ME.
NOW I SEE ALL OF THOSE WERE LIES, THEY WERE PART OF YOUR PLAN TO MAKE ME LOVE YOU.
NOW I DONT LOVE YOU OR HATE YOU, I JUST REGRET BEING WITH YOU AND I RESENT YOU.
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theangelestdevil
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2003-03-19 04:35:00]
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Re: LIES
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 09:36:10 AM AEST
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I am sorry to be negative about your work but it smacks of something that took about 10 minutes to write.
It doesn't flow and it sounds awkward, If you read it out loud you will see what I mean
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Re: LIES
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 04:33:08 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Sleepless.. I hope you don't always believe everything you're told.
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