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Moon Gazing
Contributed by
wizard
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Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 11:22:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Moon gazing through a humble frame of four by sixes, wispy clouds and sheer linen, wafting.
The moon in full bloom dreams flutter, chasing its midnight glow
so many wishing upon this moon, yet it lends us its exclusive regard.
Old Blue Eyes, Morrison and Marvin all sing their appropriate tunes, as we dream of
summer winds, moon dancing and healing. Salt kissed air streams; imparting salient dreams.
The chambermaid tidying beside us throws an overworked smile.
The brewing storm keeping its distance flashing.
The bed, obligingthe counterpane cradling our dreams. So out of place on this narrow beach,
spectacular in its solitude; begging us to remain. The ocean rings, ever present and stern.
Breaching waves catch broken dreams, the shore greeting each crash with a smile.
The shadows holding indeed more than mere darkness; so much love has been made here.
Sand cast memories forever held on this glorious beach, ever humble, yet ever proud.
Hissing palms sway, reveling in this undefiled night.
The sky holding a million memories; a million more in queue.
Every love that has been made or sought lies beneath this modest sky, lovers to be waiting permissively.
And as the sun scorched the day just hours before, so does the moon scorch these hearts,
tonight and evermore.
Copyright ©
wizard
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2008-09-27 11:22:15]
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Re: Moon Gazing
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 01:02:03 PM AEST
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Wow Wiz, this was fantastic!!!!
A most descriptive write that captivates
the reader from beginning to end.
This would have to be my favourite poem
by you Wiz~
The poem is superb and I adore this line:
The sky holding a million memories; a million more in queue.
I love the dazzling moon and a perfect night sky.
Sensational write dear poet. Keep it up.
hugs,
dreamer
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Re: Moon Gazing
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 03:49:29 PM AEST
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A beautiful romantic murel, so vivid so lovely
so right, sounds like you had a great time,
all the best to you and your lady . . .
ty like wise for your read . . .
Ben . . . |
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Re: Moon Gazing
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 01:54:10 AM AEST
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wow this is captivating and inviting.. it makes you want to go visit there.. well put into words.. lovely job here
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Moon Gazing
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by redsleeve on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 02:56:37 AM AEST
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great write.
unbelievable description of this spot on the beach. you put the reader right there with you.
thnx for sharing.
d |
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Re: Moon Gazing
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 06:40:11 AM AEST
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you have woven a tapestry of words that mesmerizes the soul
Thank you for sharing
Shari |
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Re: Moon Gazing
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd October 2008 @ 01:25:43 AM AEST
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awwww a very romantic piece.
I remember being in that area and seeing white canopy beds along the beach. We would have sat in one too, except as I recall they wanted to charge us!! LOL |
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Re: Moon Gazing
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 8th October 2008 @ 07:46:37 AM AEST
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captivating...i was honestly moved by this...thank you
kara |
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Re: Moon Gazing
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by emystar on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 12:21:26 AM AEST
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wow wiz,
Don't know how I missed this masterpeice.
Beautifull is the nite and this is awesome.
big huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy
I'd say ya'll was in heaven on Earth. |
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