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A Madman's Twisted Dream
Contributed by
ell_03
on
Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 02:03:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'd cry myself to sleep
But my soul is empty of tears
I haven't felt so alone
In oh so many years
Finally the dam breaks
It is all let free
My insanity escapes
I've lost any sense of meaning
My thoughts rage like a twister
Tearing apart my mind
My tears flow like a river
Threatening to leave me behind
I cant keep going on like this
I just need to run, to scream
I need to wake up
From what can only be described
As a madman's twisted dream
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ell_03
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2008-09-27 14:03:05]
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Re: A Madman's Twisted Dream
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 01:39:46 AM AEST
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yes, yes, it is the struggle that ails us. But it is a fine accomplishment
to be able to release it with ink. Our emotions can get the best of us, to be
sure; driving us mad with the twists and turns it can take within us in a matter
of moments. You've captured that beautifully here. Well done.
~ Breezy
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Re: A Madman's Twisted Dream
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by roseabsolute on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 03:53:29 AM AEST
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Poetry can be a great natural sedative.
Continue to write and your thoughts will work
themselves out. Lovely work.
Rose* |
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