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Beneath the Roses
Contributed by
Purple_Cherry
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Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 05:35:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
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In the garden
Beneath the roses
In the snow
pearly white,
A small indication
Of another's presence
sits alone,
out of sight.
Around the thorns
he must have crawled,
On the leaves
he lay his head.
With delicate movements,
and a careful eye,
He painted the roses
Red.
The rooster crows,
dawn awakes.
They see the roses,
Miss the hint
The only indication
of last nights guest
Lies beneath the roses,
A tiny foot print.
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Purple_Cherry
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2008-09-28 05:35:29]
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Re: Beneath the Roses
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by wizard on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 05:47:33 AM AEST
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welcome to the site!
great post!
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Re: Beneath the Roses
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by shelby on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 02:51:22 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC,
I adore this write, it is refreshing and flows like a river.
Lovely work.
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Re: Beneath the Roses
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 01:19:19 AM AEST
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Warm wishes and a hearty welcome!
Wow, this is amazing. That last line is brilliant and sends all sortsa
thoughts scurrying about in one's mind. It sets the imagination free!
There is a lovely inspiration in this that I want to grab with both
hands, hold on tight and never let it go! Beautifully done!!
~ Breezy
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Re: Beneath the Roses
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 02:53:05 AM AEST
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I love what imagery you have woven into this stunning work of art. I also like how you give mention to the work that inspired such a write. This is powerful, imaginative, and beautiful. A fine coveyance of a gift and a knack for poetry and flow. Beneath The Roses, lies something that should excite and romance the reader. And to me, it does this completely.
SUPERB!
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Re: Beneath the Roses
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by roseabsolute on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 05:26:53 AM AEST
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A purely poetic piece and very beautifully
done. Extremely enjoyable.
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