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Face to Face
Contributed by
Ambivalence
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Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 01:15:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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How many times do I have to break you?
What will it take to make you go away?
And here we are again, face to face,
even after I crushed you last time.
You dont deserve to live.
Youre nothing but a damn disgrace,
a sycophantic fake, a notorious crime!
I know all your dirty, little secrets and sins,
as God knows He wont raise you for redemption.
Its hopeless. Youre useless.
You never accomplished anything brilliant,
you cant fulfill destiny because youre an accident,
you cant make the best of life since youre the worst,
and you cant bring fortune when youre cursed.
I cant stand the sight of you!
I wish you were never born.
I cant wait until the day you vanish forever,
but for now, Ill break you once more,
hoping this is the last time Ill shatter this mirror.
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Ambivalence
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2008-09-28 13:15:25]
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Re: Face to Face
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by shelby on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 02:49:38 PM AEST
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Holy heck this is raw. Well written but very blunt and powerful.
Are we twins? ROFLMAO......
anyway this is a strong write and I hope it made you feel better. Oh I can relate believe me.
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Re: Face to Face
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by wizard on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 02:52:42 PM AEST
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so much emotion in this...
the mirror can be one of our cruelest adversaries,
nicely done,
wiz |
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Re: Face to Face
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by Loende on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 03:47:55 PM AEST
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This is...brutal and fierce and honest. I'm not sure what to say except that I lost my breath.
How many times do I have to break you?
What will it take to make you go away?
Just...brilliantly real.
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: Face to Face
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 06:34:10 PM AEST
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That's deep, that is one war no one wins, I loved it.
The Phantom |
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