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Seen You Smile
Contributed by
poetic_punk
on
Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 05:26:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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by now i know your time has come
its why my heart feels so numb
you say that you'll get by
but in the end i know you'll die
the monster has come for you
and no one else has a clue
its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile
so now your life has come to its end
some hearts just wont ever mend
a sickly smile on your face
soon you'll be leaving this place
and you wont be coming back
just a memory in the black
its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile
we've been best of friends for oh so long
but your fading like the sound of a gong
i've heard you screaming at night
and now your giving up the final fight
now your leaving us on our own
but you know your not alone
its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile
so now we greet your sad and final day
what more is there that we can say
now your time is drawing near
and now all your friends are here
its sad to finally see you go
and yet time passes slow
its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile
now i've see another friend pass on by
it seems so sad that you had to die
and my heart is full of sorrow
will i be feeling better by tomorrow
a life full of death and pain
all we ever get is rain
its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile
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Re: Seen You Smile
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 08:48:11 PM AEST
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Wow, I'd like to hear the score that goes with this for the full effect. I enjoyed the lyrics very much. I think what I appreciated the most about it is the fact that I could think of so many ways to interpret this. That makes it apllicable to many different circumstances and hearts. This is important with these dark songs in my opinion.
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Re: Seen You Smile
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by Catalina on
Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 09:32:32 PM AEST
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| a beautiful moving peice. Thanx for sharing this, it brought tears to my eyes. |
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