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a walk in the rain
Contributed by
spooky
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Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 10:24:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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together we stand as the rain falls down,
looking at each other as the rain falls like tears,
wanting to say the words to make things better,
but they won't come out,
what do we say as we hold each other for the last time,
as the rain rolls down our hands as we let go,
i want to say I love you,
but it wouldn't matter,
I let things go as i had let you go,
not by choice but your words,
you choose to let me go,
now I wallk away in the rain,
rain falls like tears ,
with a warm embrace it gives me,
I look up to feel the rain as it kisses my face,
i will hold on to this,
till i find one who has walked in the rain with tears,,,
craig s. meeks
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2008-10-01 10:24:58]
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Re: a walk in the rain
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 11:49:54 AM AEST
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Sad and touching, Craig....
This grabbed at my heart strings..
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Re: a walk in the rain
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 04:00:29 PM AEST
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Craig~
A very sad emotive write that hits straight
at the heart. Yes I feel you in this write my
friend. The rain evokes such feelings and
I can so relate to them.
May you find a beautiful loving caring soul who
shall be worthy of your love my friend.
A sad, but very well penned write.
huge hugs,
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Re: a walk in the rain
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 10:13:43 PM AEST
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oh craig! this is sooo sad and sooo beautiful!!!
hugs n' love nessa
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