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Magic
Contributed by
recklessguy
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Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 03:28:48 AM in AEST
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You move me
Blow through me
Mystical dream
Brushes of magic
warm summer breeze
each leaf dancing in the trees
raindancermyst, crystal blue
The wind whispered your name.
You shake the ground
earth moves beneath the feet
depth of your eyes pierce through me
you are the thunder
before the storm
providing the rain to cleanse me
The wind whispered our names
Bonds never broken
Copyright ©
recklessguy
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2008-10-04 03:28:48]
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Re: Magic
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 03:44:51 AM AEST
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This is amazing, romantic, and damn poetic! I loved every line of this and you two certainly coexist in poetry with a magnitude! The enitre work is breath taking but the final two lines cap this off to perfection. This is wonderful work you two!
BRAVO!
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Re: Magic
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by shelby on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 03:48:42 AM AEST
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Oh no I just missed you.
Dang it dang it you still online somewhere?
I was out of the truck and had a problem in the parking lot, I will tell you later was not good!
My friend you can and do write and I am glad we had time here and there to do this. Shall we do it again??
Where are you at? I am in Houston at the TA
Stuck without a damn load!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Call me kkkkk
Love u
Shall
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Re: Magic
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 06:24:18 AM AEST
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this poem is magic great job
Shari |
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Re: Magic
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by Starchild7 on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 08:40:14 AM AEST
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Now that was really beautiful and just flowed enchantingly, thank you.
With love and light Starchild xx |
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Re: Magic
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by karoody on
Sunday, 5th October 2008 @ 11:17:08 AM AEST
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you guys compliment each other well. whatever brought this about...
you guys should definitely work together again
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Re: Magic
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 01:27:58 PM AEST
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"The wind whispered our names"
OH! How brilliantly romantic is THAT line??? Damn fine you two.
There is so much magic within your lines. This is the ultimate
in romantic movement. Very beautiful. You two write very well
together!! :) Exceptional word choices.
~ Breezy
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