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Baby Adam
Contributed by
nothingness
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Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 06:25:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I can not do it, how can I forget you
Your gentle face your eyes a baby blue
Closed so tight in a silent plea
Begging god , please dont take me
Your mother voice still ringing clear
My baby my baby , her voice filled with fear
I tried I promise I really really tried
Even though I did my best, you still died
Where are you now, are you watching me
Angry, because I couldnt get you free?
Or are you asleep, blissfully unaware
Far away out of your mothers loving care?
If you can hear me, your mother is alive
Your sister too, she is turning five
Your father, not a day goes by
He doesnt sit down and silently cry
Life isnt the same with out his baby boy
You are still the apple of his eye, his pride and joy
Please wait for your family, and wait for me
I am so sorry, that I couldnt get you free
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nothingness
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2008-10-04 06:25:41]
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Re: Baby Adam
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 06:40:31 AM AEST
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This is so heartbreaking..... There is nothing as painful as the death of a baby... except maybe witnessing it... I am sorry you had to experience this and for the family involved.
Good write...
Hugs
Jenni
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Re: Baby Adam
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 06:47:47 AM AEST
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| It probably doesn't do any good to tell you if you did your best, there was nothing more you could do. There is a reason for everything. I hope the writing helps. May God bless. |
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Re: Baby Adam
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by karoody on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 07:43:49 AM AEST
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what an experience to be a part of. the death of a child is a hard reality to swallow. i hope this helped you as well. your emotional turmoil is obvious. yet, your peice possesses the grace it should for this little angel.
thank you
kara |
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