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Disappear
Contributed by
ek_da_poet
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Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 12:24:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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the moonlight foreshadows a shadow
a widow of the dark on her or his own
himself or herself unknown like a celestial sky
whether to weather how do you know
emotions change, the climate is unknowable
the sun speaks with kinesthetic using heat
overcast to hide the lies,baked to a degree
proportions uneven due to deceit,
live is to love and then to dust
burning until altered to ashes
perished, disappear into thin air
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2008-10-04 12:24:10]
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Re: Disappear
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by karoody on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 02:59:47 PM AEST
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very well written. your words flowed through my mind and definitely evoked emotions. with death, many feel we may just disappear when we pass on. you expressed this well.
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Re: Disappear
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by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 03:25:10 PM AEST
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nice...people want to be remembered when they die. ur poem seems to teach us that we should do things that people will remember us by for all time, hopefully for our good actions. some of our deeds will be forgotten by some, but not all. again great write. take care
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