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Time to Leave
Contributed by
korax
on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 07:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I sit here in my local bar,
at my usual stool
Staring right into time ,
like a love lost fool
I'll know that for the rest of time
I'll never see your face
A shining diamond of existence
removed from the human race
A numbness overcomes my heart
I'm stuck in a vortex of time
Not knowing what to say or do
Do I deserve this crime?
I'll never see your face again
Never smell your perfume
I'll never hear your crazy laugh
All I hear is doom
Why you had to die that day
It tears upon my heart
We had so much life to live my love
This is breaking me apart
Some "wise man" once said to me
People are taken for a reason
To hell with wisdom that's what I feel
To me it only feels like Treason
As I scatter your ashes into the wind
They blow amongst the breeze
Flowing like an angel on a cloud
Then resting in the trees
You and I are now apart
No matter what they say
So I've taken this chance to join you
I feel its the only way
Goodbye mum, goodbye dad
Please try to understand
I need to see my love again
In our cherished promised land.
Copyright ©
korax
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2003-03-19 19:45:00]
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Re: Time to Leave
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by emystar on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:53:20 AM AEST
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Woo!!
This write is Earth shaking!
I know ur still here 'cause u comented on one of my writes in the last few days so this means ur still on the planet with us, thank God.
This touched me really deep as my 32 year old nepheiw passed 2 years in July so my Ssis got her son back in ashes but he was a donor and everthing but his heart-n-lungs were used to save lives..this has been our consulation in it all.
I'm so happy u got my attention 'cause I've never read u before at least don't remember.
I can't believe no one commented on this. Your writing is jus tottally Earth shaking stuff.
Please send any new post the link to my e-mail as I don't wonna miss any thing u pen puts in words from deep within your soul.
faith, hope, peace, joy,
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