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Scatter
Contributed by
navydocny
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Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 10:59:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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My heart stops its scream
The autumn winds are blowing
Leaves scatter like love
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navydocny
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2008-10-06 10:59:12]
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Re: Scatter
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by shelby on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 02:28:59 PM AEST
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Oh oh Steve my friend this is so beautiful.
You sealed it in three lines with such power and beauty.
I hope things work out for you dear!
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Scatter
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by Lilymaemax on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 02:53:05 PM AEST
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As usual it's just perfect.Nothing more to say.
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Re: Scatter
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 07:39:03 PM AEST
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Steve,
Very powerful yet gentle piece.
Good luck my friend.....Mike |
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Re: Scatter
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 02:26:42 AM AEST
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steve,
this is something i could never pull off! so much emotion, so few words.
best of luck to you
best of my blessings
kara
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