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New York at dawn
Contributed by
shelby
on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 02:18:21 PM in AEST
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A hint of glow in the distance,
then I knew we were near.
Wishing the sun would appear
so I could see more of the views.
Never fret there is time in this day.
Asphalt and traffic, Lady liberty off in the water
the Bay and the Ocean,
people the people, I could have been taken aback
but wasn't.
Each day is a good day,
each road takes us someplace
even during times of uncertainty
yes at the moment when lost.
The roads merge together
and we blend lightly.
In with the dawn, merge on the interstates
got the load there.
New York By Dawn........
ps Reck if you read this we are in Jersey at the Petro
we been up since yesterday morning at 6!!!!!!!
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shelby
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2008-10-06 14:18:21]
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Re: New York at dawn
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by navydocny on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 05:54:26 PM AEST
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Welcome to my favorite part of the world...
Home.....
Careful out there...they're crazy.....
Great atmospheric write!
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Re: New York at dawn
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 08:10:50 PM AEST
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beautiful
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Re: New York at dawn
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 10:17:36 PM AEST
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wow shell, this was awesome! HEY!! You are just below me now! (you are
actually closer than Daniel to me at the moment. lol)
Beautiful pictures hun. And the write makes me long to visit NYC. I REALLY
want to go there for Christmas some year. It's always been a dream of
mine. ^_^ Beautiful words hun. Now get off here and get some sleep!! roflmao
*huge huggers*
~ Breezy
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Re: New York at dawn
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 03:30:12 AM AEST
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cool post! i loved the mood it set! love the photos too! keep it coming!
loves ya
kara
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Re: New York at dawn
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 08:12:48 AM AEST
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Hey grrlfriend..you seem to be having one heck of a time.....Good for you..Enjoy New Jersey for me... I love it there.. Can't say the same about NY tho... although this poem brought back some fond memories..
Nice write..
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Re: New York at dawn
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 10:27:46 AM AEST
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| this is way cool! anytime you need a rider" I`m up for it! Lane |
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