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My very own voice
Contributed by
Claudia2008
on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 08:07:49 PM in AEST
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Were goin down in flames
But man you know its all the same
Its isnt easy being this way
Yeah, you know I could go all day
The size of this heart
No it dont mean a damn thing
Were both in cardiac arrest
And the person to blame aint no king
Im the way that I am
And you dont have a choice
You gotta listen to every last word
In my very own voice
Walkin down the street hoping this will change
I saw you with her, didnt think it was stange
Ill spend every last moment tasting your charm
I just got one more thing to say I dont mean you any harm
The size of this heart
No it dont mean a damn thing
Were both in cardiac arrest
And the person to blame aint no king
Im the way that I am
And you dont have a choice
You gotta listen to every last word
In my very own voice
Everything has gone down hill
Im standing here choking down this pill
You were never here for me
No you will never see
What you did for me that day
It touched my heart in a good way
I wont forget your face
No I wont forget your face
The size of this heart
No it dont mean a damn thing
Were both in cardiac arrest
And the person to blame aint no king
Im the way that I am
And you dont have a choice
You gotta listen to every last word
In my very own voice
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Re: My very own voice
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 08:37:43 PM AEST
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I think it's fantastic.
Good work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: My very own voice
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by shelby on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 08:46:29 PM AEST
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For a first try dang lady you are rocking the page off.
I like!
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Re: My very own voice
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 02:35:58 AM AEST
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i very much enjoyed these as well! impressive first song for sure...i would definitely love to hear the music with this and would love to see more of your stuff
kara |
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Re: My very own voice
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by zenith66 on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 07:30:16 AM AEST
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very nice honest lyrics, sounds like someone i know, youve definantly got the potential here, you write with a nice flair and honesty, adn tell a story too!!!
nice work keep it up!!! |
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