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Fading Memory
Contributed by
brasco
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Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 09:24:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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The pains you feel this day
The weight that loads your heart
Will silently drift away
And from memory depart
The agony this week bestows
Will melt as winter thaws
The sadness this moment surely knows
Shall be lost behind forgotten doors
This month with all its battles waged
And mental scars to prove the fight
Will be washed away with storms raged
And go gently to the night
This year which plagues you so
Will soon pass to distant thought
As times ebb and flow
These memories will come to naught
Copyright ©
brasco
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2008-10-07 09:24:31]
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Re: Fading Memory
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by zenith66 on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 04:32:58 PM AEST
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hmmm i liked this one, it was slightyly lacking in flow, but i thnink it was well realised with nothing too complicated, i could feel the emotion leaking from these words and i love how its looking to the future, we all nedd to do this sometimes, the last two verses were especially touching and you have got alot of talent, it just needs to be tamed!!
great writing!! |
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