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TURNING POINT
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 08:24:55 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Turning Point
Clothes outdated, faded and torn
Face whiskery, weather beaten and worn
Years have taken their toll
Used up everything I had except for my soul
That was buried deep behind the faade, my visible outer shell
Not a person on earth could see inside to my own personal Hell
I live for the day, terrified of the night
That is when the demons take flight
The whirlwind that is my life continues to blow
Further into the black hole I continue to go
Reaching the exact point of no return
Deciding to give up without any concern
A split second decision you did make
Your own safety you did forsake
With a firm hand breaking through my shell
Entering boldly into my own personal Hell
From out of the blue you saved my life that night
Encouraging me to walk the path that is right
You have been the spotlight through the darkest of nights
Since your arrival the demons have not been in sight
Thank you my friend for caring so much about me
One day I will repay the favor, just wait and see
Though we are kept apart by time and space
I will never forget the image of your face
Deadwriter
10/09/2008
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Re: TURNING POINT
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 08:37:24 PM AEST
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Thank goodness that friend was there.
I would die without you around my friend.
This poem had so many depths of emotion in it.
Strong, powerful, tender, sad, forlorn, geezzzz.
You captured everything perfectly.
Awesome work.
Michelle
hug hug superrrrrrr HUG and big sloppy kisses
*SMILES* |
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Re: TURNING POINT
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by Lionel on
Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 09:40:51 PM AEST
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| Very good and moving poem. About a real friend. They are kinda rare this day and time. |
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Re: TURNING POINT
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 10th October 2008 @ 07:01:34 PM AEST
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We all have turning points in our lives at some time.... and most times, someone is responsible for it. For this we are grateful... Thank you for sharing this.... Hope the whirlwind ceases for you..
A very special write, my friend...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: TURNING POINT
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 06:52:54 AM AEST
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This is so beautifully inspiring. There is a softness to the desperation
that makes it so wonderfully beautiful to witness the end of the piece.
Connection. And it is there between every human being. I'm glad you
wrote and posted this piece to remind us all that there are those
who have decided that separation is not the key. Even at the risk of
their own life. It gives me enormous hope and a faith I've not seen
in a while. I thank you so much for that friend. Exceptional write. ^_^
~ Breezy
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Re: TURNING POINT
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by lilmissy on
Thursday, 6th November 2008 @ 01:24:55 PM AEST
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| kinda morbid, me likey! :) i used to write like this, but then shidd got better and i got a teeny bit happier and walla! lol... very nice poem though!! |
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Re: TURNING POINT
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th November 2008 @ 11:50:27 AM AEST
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Not only is heartwarming to see someone reach a turning point, but even more so that someone else takes the time to help.
Appreciate the write, thanks. |
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Re: TURNING POINT
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by Muinanyere on
Sunday, 15th February 2009 @ 08:54:05 PM AEST
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| this was so beautiful and heart felt, thanks for sharing it, great write :) |
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Re: TURNING POINT
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th February 2009 @ 06:07:48 PM AEST
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| This is an excellent poem. I wish I had that someone to save me from MY personal hell! |
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