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Reality Owing
Contributed by
Urizen
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Friday, 10th October 2008 @ 06:34:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You dare snare me again,
You with procession of madness
Escape to a ring,
You stand and stare and kick me in the guts,
I know when asked you'd say
It was barely lust never mind love.
Foolish and crazy,
Cracked and broken,
A sore wound open to the salt-water rain,
And once again as we approach the end,
Does the sun appear to evaporate the pain?
Copyright ©
Urizen
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2008-10-10 18:34:55]
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Re: Reality Owing
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by karoody on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 03:35:47 AM AEST
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This peice spoke volumes to me. I have actually felt like this and not known the words for the emotions. Sometimes emotions just don't have nice neat words.
Thankyou
Kara |
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Re: Reality Owing
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 07:59:17 AM AEST
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Unfortunately, the pain never just goes away like that, no matter how much we wish it could.
I like this write, you use quite simple language to say big things, and that's actually quite a hard thing to do, and as karoody said, this speaks volumes.
Great write,
Phil xxx |
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Re: Reality Owing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 06:51:46 AM AEST
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Very powerful stuff, I especially liked this bit:
'I know when asked you'd say
It was barely lust never mind love.'
That was an emotional sentence.
-Phil |
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