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Enemy Within
Contributed by
justlearning69
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Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
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oops
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Cautious, to escape eluding eyes,
Paranoid with fear,
Hide from the unknown spies,
Dig in dirt till fingers hurt,
The grave is sanctuary,
Do what i want,
Not when im told,
That enemy was me!
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Re: Enemy Within
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 04:33:45 AM AEST
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I really like the poem. I am not quite sure what you mean by "That enemy was me!" All the same, sometimes shorter poems are better becuase they get straight to the point. Great read!
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Re: Enemy Within
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by kolbrun on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 08:00:40 AM AEST
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Lots of very great talent. Great write, tells the truth, for real. Ideas, and possible lead offs are amazing. Excellent.
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