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Dancing in the Mirror
Contributed by
Blake
on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 02:48:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Dancing in the mirror
With memories reflection
Nothing to be gained here
A waste of time
In the back of my mind
Her smile greets me warmly
Her touch handles me gently
Her scent lends assurance
She is real and with me
Right here, right now
Abrupt intrusion
Cheats my fantasy
Sucks me down
Down to reality
The reality of this
Continuous pattern
Of another heartbroken
Would be anniversary
Kneeling down to present your rose
My tears begin their free falls into the soil
This stone is cold as my fingertips graze the edges
Laying your rose softly against the frostbitten indicator
The marker of your previous existence
Brought myself painfully back to my feet
I begin another calm yet hesitant walk away
With that one final glance back from a distance
I speak softly my last words of this melancholy meeting
That I miss you dreadfully
Love you awfully
Crying in the mirror
With memories reflection
Nothing to be gained here
And everything to be lost
Copyright ©
Blake
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2008-10-12 14:48:59]
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Re: Dancing in the Mirror
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by Lilymaemax on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 03:17:57 PM AEST
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This is very touching.It must have been a true love.At least you've had that so many people will never experience what that is like.Look forward to your next poem
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