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Where?
Contributed by
navydocny
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Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 09:59:24 PM in AEST
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Where do I belong
In your heart or somewhere else
God will only know
Copyright ©
navydocny
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2008-10-13 21:59:24]
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Re: Where?
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 10:05:50 PM AEST
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Soul searching write..Nicely done
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Re: Where?
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by shelby on
Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 10:20:19 PM AEST
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Oh this is so deep.
Do not be lonely my friend, I love ya!
I am off to sleep been a stressing day.
Take care of you!
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Where?
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 10:41:05 PM AEST
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u will find ur place. the day will soon arrive by hook or by crook. and sometimes things just dont come to u, thats y u gotta go get it if u want it really bad. support to u. nice precise write. take care
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Re: Where?
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by karoody on
Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 11:47:30 PM AEST
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Steve,
I sincerely hate that your heart is feeling such pain. Your friends are here for you and they love you. I am one of them. I hope you realize this. We both know that doesn't quite fill the void. There is still the object of the poem. The heart you try to reach. I know your friends can't make all the pain go, but we are here. I hope that helps ease that loneliness for you. With Blessings for brighter days
Kara
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Re: Where?
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by tifrob on
Tuesday, 14th October 2008 @ 11:07:58 AM AEST
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I like this. Questioning & Having Faith.
~Me~ |
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Re: Where?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th October 2008 @ 12:25:23 AM AEST
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Very good haiku. What greatness it tis when another poem inspires us to write. I have done that and it's so cool.
Sorry to hear about your pain though but I have seen some great poetry come out of pain and loneliness. I suppose everything has a positive side????
I sincerely hope what ever is happening to make you feel this way gets better.
Take care.
Tim
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