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Blues Poetry
Contributed by
RougeCoeur
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Wednesday, 15th October 2008 @ 11:48:24 AM in AEST
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Blues Poetry
Soulful strains of blue refrains
old house and broken window panes
long dirt roads and dusty grime
travelin' light ain't got a dime
just tappin' time
nothing left but a sorrowful song
and heart breakin' painful wrong
tried to be strong for way too long.
can't find no place where I belong
just singin' my song
got no car just this old guitar
and his friend a jar on the bar
plenty of scars cover this heart
been there so long, tears me apart
just tellin' my story
harmonica's beat an dirty old room
puffin' and blowin' out my tune
another cold night under dim light
weathering life's storm while I perform
just tappin my foot
a lonely path but never alone
with heart ache down to the bone
sit on the bench waitin for a bus
to another old hotel with dust.
just tapping my time
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Re: Blues Poetry
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by karoody on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 12:50:01 AM AEST
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Wow! I loved this one so much! i enjoyed it's rhythmic feel. This was so unique and full of feeling! Can't wait to read more from you!
Thank you
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Re: Blues Poetry
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by shelby on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 10:07:12 PM AEST
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Oh I relate to this...... I to am off down the road lol.
A bit different but the same.
This could be a song! You rock. Keep in touch I love your poetry!
Michelle |
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