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Home At Last
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 12:49:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I am not perfect
And I will never be
Because I have not met you
I cried sometimes at nights
When is all too lonely too bear
And I wonder where you are
I braved myself everyday
Facing the world
With smiles and laughs
Enduring the nights of coldness
Waiting for your warmth
To cover me someday
Breathing in your scent of love
And knowing I am finally in your arms
And we are, at long last, home
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Re: Home At Last
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 01:33:01 AM AEST
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i got that warm, comfortable, gentle vibe as i read this, similar to the feeling when u r "home at last" from a long day's work/trip. love too can somewhat feel that way, and it's true how your lover's arms serve as your shelter during the storm. nice write. take care
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Re: Home At Last
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by Anu on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 01:45:44 AM AEST
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Too Good...!!
Could feel it....even i have went through the same ....
Well written.. :) |
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