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rip father and me
Contributed by
rebelwcause
on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 03:45:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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A cigarette is burning in a young man's hand
The other holds the whisky and he can barely stand
The ground is unstable and he is barely able
But he staggers to the grave the home of the late brave
Where his father lays to rest, where his heart reaches out from his chest
He drops a rose on the stone, chases the whisky with a tear
And stumbles away to let his hero rest alone
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rebelwcause
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2008-10-17 15:45:30]
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Re: rip father and me
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by outlawpoet on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 03:55:03 PM AEST
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| Great write i can tell it is heart felt tou painted a great scene here i felt like i was a bystandard watching this happen great job |
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Re: rip father and me
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 04:05:59 PM AEST
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Great imagery here... Nicely done...
Welcome to YPDC....
Jenni |
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Re: rip father and me
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by redsleeve on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 06:06:02 PM AEST
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very emotional write, love the imagery.
great post! thanks for sharing
d |
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Re: rip father and me
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by walsh on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 07:09:56 PM AEST
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Touching, Beautiful Imagery, This Is An Experience Similiar To My Own, It Brought A Lump To My Throat And A Tear To My Eyes... You Capture The Poignancy Exsquistley.
In A word, Wow |
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Re: rip father and me
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by Mila on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 03:22:37 AM AEST
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| Very touching! |
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