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~Stardust~
Contributed by
shelby
on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 12:54:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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In the shadows
of our hearts.
Our wounds
have cut in deep.
Tears shed
by curt words said
shattering souls
and smothering
ember within the midst.
Then .....
There is magic
star-shine
Heavens bliss
an eternal kiss
and star-dust
shimmering
all about your feet.
This
is what dreams
are made of
universal bliss
that none
can take away.
Gather it
spread it
near your pillow
and let it
tuck you safe
to sleep.
Wing upon
the wings
of galaxies
and hear
the winds
soft sigh.
For
there are those
that are
the things
that magic
are made of.
That shine
even through
the shadows
and the rain.
May star-dust
nestle near you
the universe
sit round you
and tuck
you safe to sleep.
Hugsssss
Michelle
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-10-18 00:54:28]
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Re: ~Stardust~
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by emystar on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 01:10:49 AM AEST
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AAAAAaawww shelby,
this is so sweet.
huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: ~Stardust~
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by karoody on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 03:04:01 AM AEST
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chelle~
that really touched me! this was so beautiful! like a little lullabye...just for me...
thank you
loves you bunches
karabear |
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Re: ~Stardust~
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 05:07:52 AM AEST
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shining bright little star
Shari |
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Re: ~Stardust~
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by Crow on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 08:35:28 AM AEST
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Shel..what a wonderful tribute to your friend..
I missed you on the puter" Lane |
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Re: ~Stardust~
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 11:48:33 AM AEST
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Awww Grrlfriend, this is a beautiful poem and such a caring tribute to Kara....
Hugs to you both..
Jenni |
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Re: ~Stardust~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 11:48:54 AM AEST
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| I absolutelu LOVED the imagery protrayed in this poem. Great job! |
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Re: ~Stardust~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 04:41:48 PM AEST
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Oh Sweets, this is so damn touching. What a golden heart you do possess.
All who are blessed with your friendship are lucky as the stars are lucky
to have the sky. This was filled with a beauty that cannot be compared.
Brilliantly penned, my dearest friend and so unbelievably gorgeous!
*hugs you tight*
~ Breezy
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Re: ~Stardust~
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by redsleeve on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 05:58:46 PM AEST
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magical!
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Re: ~Stardust~
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by Lionel on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 12:21:36 AM AEST
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| This is such a sweet poem of optimism. Great for the young especially. |
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Re: ~Stardust~
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 10:10:03 AM AEST
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michelle, what a sweet ,touching read.
I love these words
'Heavens bliss
an eternal kiss'
Awesome..........Mike |
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Re: ~Stardust~
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by Recyclebin on
Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 12:33:16 AM AEST
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Holy.. I'm in awe. If I can ever come close to this piece then I will know that I'm a true poet.
This was really a nice piece.
*shakes head* wow.
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Re: ~Stardust~
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by outlawpoet on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 03:04:12 PM AEST
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| very touching write we need more people like you in the world. good job |
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