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Losing You
Contributed by
rebelwcause
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Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 12:40:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My life is so much better now that I've gotten you off my mind
I got me a true love woman who takes up all my time
She will never leave me i know this for a fact
She never tries to deceive me and i know she's got my back
She never takes it personal when i feel the need to fight
And never concerns herself too much with who is wrong or right
She stands right beside me when clouds overshadow the sun
And the way i find myself loving her is the best thing I've ever done
I thought it would be too hard to ever love someone this way
but now I'm here in love again and i have to say...
I'm finally over loving you, i needed a love tried and true
You could not love me under the gun and the way i find myself losing you
Is the best thing I've ever done
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rebelwcause
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2008-10-18 12:40:08]
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Re: Losing You
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by outlawpoet on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 12:45:41 PM AEST
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| good write i have enjoyed your work so far keep it up. |
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Re: Losing You
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by breathofrane on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 02:28:57 PM AEST
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| I can definitely feel where you are coming from and where you are going. I think everyone who hasn't already found that great match is looking for it. Very well written. It would make a great song. |
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Re: Losing You
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by shelby on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 05:43:15 PM AEST
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You captured a sense of power in this write.
The overcoming and moving on.
Nicely done.
Michelle
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Re: Losing You
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by eternalsunshine on
Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 10:35:39 AM AEST
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| heartfelt, wonderful flow of words...thank you |
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