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I Am
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 06:17:29 PM in AEST
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I am your conscience, I am your doubt
I am the words that just slip out
I am the reason, I am your fate
I am the one who has no forsake
I am the guilt, that you wear well
I am the sadness on which you dwell
I am the loneliness that tears you in two
I am also the hope, that will pull you through
I am in your mind, I show you the way
I am the the cause of things that you say
I am the spokesman, I am your guiding light
I am the one in your dreams every night
I am your best friend and enemy too
I am your conscience, devoted to you
I am the one who decides what you do
I am just me, but in reality I am you
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Re: I Am
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by shelby on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 06:41:26 PM AEST
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Sue,
good to see you gracing the pages here once more.
I hardly spend time here these days. I am lucky to have been here to read this lovely poem, nice work as always. Profound the end really gets your attention!
Hugs
Michelle
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Re: I Am
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 06:55:25 PM AEST
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Deeply profound... Well said...
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Re: I Am
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by karoody on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 02:40:23 AM AEST
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this is the first time i have actually gotten an opportunity to read any of your work. i sincerely enjoyed this and will definitely look for more from you.
you really got me thinking
thank you
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Re: I Am
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by wizard on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 09:26:33 PM AEST
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beautifully done,
nice writing,
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Re: I Am
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 06:29:10 PM AEST
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perfectly written, captivating and beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: I Am
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 2nd August 2020 @ 03:22:16 PM AEST
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| Fluid reality...................... |
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